Pain and Love ( My adapted version of the fairytale )
Thump, was the sound that elevated through the hallway as Alison’s mother pushed her against the wall. Alison was a beautiful 16 year old girl who had aspirations to one day become a model and work for a fashion magazine, she was 5`10 with long blonde hair and dazzling blue eyes, some would say her mother was envious of this, so rather that being proud of what she had created she would find any excuse to beat taunt and torment her. Alison lived alone with her mother as her father passed away when she was 13, all her family lived in America so it was just Alison and her mum.But there was one person Alison could turn to, his name was David, David lived next door, he was 17 and had a very close relationship with her, despite living next door they could call each other up and speak for hours on end about everything and anything, David was also attractive and eventually they started dating, but Alison knew if her mum was ever to find out she would be very angry and once again resort to beating her.One day Alison’s evil cousin Beatrice came over from America to spend the week with her auntie, as Beatrice walked up the driveway towards the front door she caught a glimpse of David, she was bedazzled by his handsomeness. Unfortunately for Alison Beatrice did not like her so one day when she was at fashion school Beatrice went searching through her room and found a photo album, it had the only pictures of her father she owned and Towards the end of the album was a series of pictures taken in a photo booth of Alison and David hugging and kissing. Jealousy and hatred filled Beatrices eyes and she did not hesitate to tell her auntie.Alison mum was infuriated.The minute Alison walked through the door Alison’s mother started punching her beautiful face, Alison started to scream, David heard the screams next door and knew what was going on, he tried to block out the sounds but the more her tried the louder they appeared , he couldn’t take no more , he ran to Alison’s front door and it was still open, as he walked through the hallway he witnessed Alison’s mum scratch through Alison’s skin, the teardrops rolling down Alison’s face was disguised by the blood which now overpowered over her cheek . Alison’s mum had always hit her in the past but even Alison’s mum knew she had gone too far.She immediately ran out the front door, just as she started going through the driveway she was stopped by a 3 men in suits and a police officer, David had called the social services, Alison’s mum was instantly arrested. After and hour Alison got the chance to clean up and pack her bags, even after an hour it was clear the scratch that her mother had given was going to leave a permanent scar across her face. By this time the social services was ready to take Alison into a care home, David was in tears and did not realise the seriousness the phone call he made. He asked to speak to Alison alone.‘Alison, I’m sorry and I love you’ David sharedShe replied ‘Its ok, I love you too and one day I was us to get married and be together forever,Take this ring, it was my fathers. Keep hold of this and one day when I come back and find you can propose to me with this ring and we can be together’ he started in her eyes for a few seconds , placed his hands across her face where the scar was and said ‘Ok’. Little did they know that Beatrice was in the next room and heard every word.Alison was then taken away, David went home, and Beatrice got escorted to the airport.When Beatrice arrived to America she told her 3 other evil sisters of the proposition David and Alison made, Beatrice wanted to do everything in her power to ensure Alison would not marry David, but she knew she had to wait some time before making her move.2 years later Beatrice’s 3 sisters helps make her over to look like Alison, Beatrice then flew back to England to where David lived. As she approached the driveway David was looking out the window, he could not believe his luck as he saw this beautiful blonde girl approaching his doorstep, he thought it was Allison and could not contain his excitement and ran to the front door.‘I’m back, I came back like I promised I missed you have you got the ring?’‘yes yes I do’ , as David got down on one knee and stared into Beatrice’s eyes he didn’t feel the connection he had once felt, but her thought it was because of the time they had spent apart with no contact. Just then a black car was parking up in to the driveway next door where Alison once lived, a blonde girl then came out the car, and she instantly recognised Beatrice and knew what had happened. ‘Beatrice how could you, you ruined my life and you came back to ruin it some more, David it’s me Alison!’ David was confused and didn’t know what to do; he den noticed the scar and then recognised Alison.‘Alison, it’s really you!’ He then proposed and one year later they got married. Beatrice flew back to America and was never to be seen again.
200 WORD TREATMENT
Pain and love
Alison is a 16 year old girl who lives alone with her mother who abuses her, she falls in love the boy next door called David and they peruse a relationship in secret. Alison’s evil cousin comes to live with them and likes David too, she then finds out he is dating Alison and due to jealously tell Alison’s mother, which results to her beating her to the point where she leaves a scar on her face, her mother feels guilty and tries to run away, but by then its too late as David has called social services. Alison’s mother gets arrested and Alison gets taken into care. David promises to take care of her ring and when she comes back for him he promises to propose to her with It, Beatrice finds this out and does everything in her power to try and prevent this from happening. 2 years later she disguises herself as Alison and tries to win David’s heart, she almost manages to do so but Alison returns, David remembers the scar and they reconnect and fall in love all other again, David proposes and they marry a year later. Beatrice is never to be seen again.
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